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Old 06-09-08, 04:43 PM   #9
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Voted For: Lay Fear

ok this was a one-sided battle

lay fear outdone dun in terms of everything (vocab, originality, flow structure, and harder hitting wittier punches)

dun it is really a cop out to start a battle and then make up excuses for dropping weak. we don't care about how drunk you are just make sure you drop as best as you can, you could have always waited until you had some free time when you're sober before you dropped.

gay jokes are played so you have to make sure you drop some originality with it

for example just telling the other guy he has men lovers is outweighed by lay fear's 1st punch

and syllable counting is essential for making a piece flow

V// Lay Fear (by miles)