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Old 08-10-05, 08:14 AM   #13
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King Solo

Y’all know that kid Kool, he was dope not so long ago
A kid ahead of his time, until he realised his watch was slow
^ Nice opener good punch

Dude thinks he gone ‘serve me’…truth is I think he’s able
After all, it is only food that his ass brings to the table
^ Good bar nice diss

I was gone merk Kool’s pic, but its too easy to kill this herb
I just gotta mimic his actions, and verbally beat him with “werds”
^ Nice closer on B lol @ werds personal

Sum shit about E.C, he used to ‘draw blood’ but then,
It all came to an end after somebody came and stole his pen
^ Lol cool opener good flow so far on ya overall verse

E.C steps into his battles and foes are scared to throw a word in
Cuz nobody fucks with E.C………that’s why he’s still a virgin
^ lol liking this glorification switched into diss style it's funny/sarcastic

E.C’s name packs a double meaning, yea he’s one for creativity
Cuz his E.xplicit C.ontent is suckin dick as an E.xtra C.urricular activity
^ Initial personal good closer

Overall
Hard verse decent punches cool flow personals in places were aight cool verse overall

These retards belong in the special olympics, they don’t fit in this place
Cuz I told them ‘lets go blow for blow’ so they ‘sneezed in my face’
But I won’t fight you two, I’ll be a spy and go undercover
And have ya both ‘caught with ya pants down’………………
……………………………....then watch you ‘beat each other’

E.C

it's the special olympics, imma win, now hand me that,
difference between me and you? text is col b's handicap,
^ Punch is meh...1st line self-g coulda been better fam

you were never on my level, so please just stop debating
why waste time in leagues, when clearly u need elevating,
^ Not feelin it again 1st line self-g and 2nd bar no punch

under pressure he siezes, and has no clue where to begin,
so ill just leave Col b in the same state his punches are in,
^ 2nd line is aight 1st line is a good set up

out in the first round, looks like kol b aint getting payed,
coz ill put you in confinment and leave you Neglected With Aids,
^ NWA diss is good nice closer

King Solo

remember on aim? we used to text and see who flows best,
ye solo helped me elevate, looks like i passed him in the process,
^ Meh...again bruv self-g no punch jus trying to state facts

mate, you've fell off and yet your lyrics are supposed to be ranged,
how am i meant to lose when each punch you landed was played,
^ Aight bar coulda been better punch wise though

imma paint myself a 'picture' of solo's raps when they beat me,
but the only time there 'being framed'........ is when there on 'tv',*
^ lol i liked this bar best so far out of ya whole verses

solo's a fake, best in the u.k? naa, now people won't be savin ya,
your visa run out? coz i wondered y u migrated back to australia,**
^ Closer is aight diss shoulda been laid out better rhyme was aight though good perosnal

Overall
You ain't win this coz consistantly Solo was better wit punches you kept throwing self-g bars in this wasn't the best i've seen from you was good in some places but i think you could've took more time on this...flow & structure was nice again though

Kool Col B

Solo

put anutha shrimp on tha barby, u startin 2 annoy me
u wont have a "g'day" cuz u bout 2 lose, croykee!
^ LOL @ TRYIN TO TYPE LIKE AN AUSTRALIAN...made me laugh lol

u aint no fuckin king, u aint got no crown sucka
sucka? yeah i sed it, cuz he's always down unda
^ LOL personal nice punch as well was good i laughed again

in 5 years i'll b rich, ur house'll b made frum cardoard
tha closest solo ever wuz 2 bein "fly" wuz in star wars*
^ no connection bar wise...punch was meh...you shuoulda stuck to the comical stance

im rymin 2 tha beat yo, he rappin 2 hiz didgeridoos
bitch, git off tha comp n go hunt fo my shoes**
^ LOL @ this closer lol i laughed again

E.C.

i'll make fun of ur country all i want, i'll come n give tha queen a slap
hello hello hello, jolly good battle i must say ol chap
^ LOL @ TRYIN TO TYPE ENGLISH HA ROFL...but wack bar self-g 1st line & 2nd line vocab lacked it's allo allo allo

ima kill this muthaphukkin fruit loop, chea, here we go
cuz im a cerial killa, b4 he dies he will say "cherio"
^ Rhyme weak punch is aight could be better though

i see e.c. and si.............. hombre, he sux
u wouldnt b on my level if u were ridin on tha bus***
^ 1st proper attempted bar by you i LOL'd @ i felt this

u think ur shit wuz betta then my shit? this spucca betta dream on
cuz tha best ryme frum hiz country, were in tha teletubbies theme song
-_- @ Teletubbies reference closer was meh

Overall
Out of all the verses this mae me laugh the most...vocab sucked comically was funny flow was basic...focus on this comical type of rap...you could whore a lot of people if you work on this style

Vote
I'm goin wit Solo on this he was the most consistant out of the 3 on this battle i ain't sayin who was 2nd or 3rd coz really thats irrelevant but was a nice read from all 3 keep droppin peoples
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