this was good man, nice story in here

When all of a sudden, at my door, there was a sudden percussion.
and I paused enough for my soul and death to quit their discussion.

^nice, .. try to se more multis, tho.. makes it even more better to read, & u need to up vocab on some places, but other than that this was a nice read, good story..nice concept, .. keep it up !... =)

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