Odi et Amo
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I don't really enjoy reading pieces like this but anyway. The concept was uhm grimey and gangsta I suppose and that's the overall vibe it gave me as well. The vocab was on point, had some interesting shit in there, good lines with nice wordplay but I feel you could've used some more variation and creativity you know. The flow was good though.
Keep at it!
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