thought the cut on the sample would make a nice chorus section, but it could use sum kind of variation for a verse. The drums were weak link on this beat. I saw what u were trying to do wit them but i don't think u achieved the flow u wer aimin for. Snare and High Hat being cleaner might have helped, but i felt the whole sequence was what made it drag.

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