what everyone has said so far should be taken iton consideration..
although his verse was better..yours wasnt that bad..
but look at NLitends breakdown..u lacked punches..
fuck multis..you dont need'em if thats not your style..
all you need is flow..structure..and original punches..
be creative as possible...

vets do get more attention on this site..but they also recognize talent...i dont think u got dickrode hear..cuz if token would have dropped halfass..a real vet would have let him know he dropped half ass and gave you the props you deserve at the same time..

go to LLL and read the battle there... try to see what it is that real vets are looking for in a verse..not saying that i am a vet..but i do notice and give props to those that drop decent verses..

just keep battlin and read verses from the top heads on the site..its worth the time...

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