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Old 05-08-05, 09:42 PM   #8
.:Jack Rackam:.
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When our 'Mindz Kollide' your verse equals retarded patients
All flow no elevation ya barz like water in basements
^^decent, wasnt overly hard hitting thou....5/10
Punches like drunken fighters thrown but way off of they aim
Ya shit sucks got the same chance going up as a crashed plane
^^wasnt feelin this, no creativity cali..-_-.......4/10
You ass lame but hold on a minute im link tossing
How you dickride stay on 'Flow' like broken sink facuets
^^forced ryhme scheme in this bar...weak punch...3/10
Think he 'dope' cuz his dad did coke?...but he sniffed them lines
So you aint shit only considered gifted round Christmas time
^^hell no,..we both kno this punch should be banned...0/10
Watching for stolen rhymes ya crew was just u and a biter
He 'KEN/can' not see a dope punch unless we talking bout street fighter
^^actually, personal is fake, intro was never in mindz kollide...2/10
punch was ok, wordplay was aight
Get your 'Ghostwriters' tell um when they drop to give it they best
Cuz when it comes to being a herb you defintly 'BIgger Then The Rest'
^^this was basically a filler, weak punch...3/10
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cali, overall, seriously did you even try on this drop...
played lines and concepts everywhere, false personals everywhere
i really wasnt feeling much from your entire verse.......
ive seen way better from you in almost every other drop ive read from ya..
you seem to have put a poor effort in, so in turn you get a poor result..
we still koo, but you gotta come with more then this man
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17/60
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I hear you in construction now…working, earnin that hard cash
CALI's real life elevation equals his flows..burgers to hard hats
^^eh, this was ok,......................5/10
I laugh at your audios…You actually think you supply the heat??
Cali can ''stick veggies between his cheeks''..n still couldn't ''ride a beat''
^^ok,.5.5/10
RV kids say CALI's phat...but theyre talkin bout whats under his bare skin.
Duke, as far as punches go..you dont "throw shit" like chimps with impared limbs
^^good, but you stretched this way to far with filler words.....5/10
Should be banned...lost a pink slip battle…i guess your lifes through
Sonned by Lay-Text..sorry, but this time the condom ripped YOU
^^nice,..not overly true considering the circumstances....6/10
TheREALCalisHere?..Somebody please give this nerd a clue
40 posts a day…we don't need REAL in your name to confirm its you
^^nice,.good personal....creative.........................7/10
CALI's from NY? ComptoN and BrooklyN DO relate, it's NOT fiction
Triple the last letters = the only person who made 'Cold Outside' worth a listen
^^stretched but it was aight for a closer 4.5/10
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try not to stretch your lines so bad, your personals were good
but your flow lacked, punches for the most part were solid,
some decent xcreativity shown in this verse.........
lay text line was prolly the best but seein as he wasnt banned it kinda
doesnt rlate as a true personal................
28/60
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