callin someone a rat is weak wordplay and it wasn't done well at all
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you dont need the capital letters on your wordplay, thats lame. and that punch might be ok if dudes name was ryan.
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both ya'lls wording was off and neither punch hit very hard b/c of it but imma go wit wicked one for not wastin his second line tryin to put a lame multi in it. if u ganna us a multi put it in the first line or make sure it builds the punch up.

vote- wicked one

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