Mix that primary singing vocal a little more.
It just pops in and sounds pretty loud.

but damn..i like this concept.
nice entrance attitude. good flow, that breathless part was pretty sickkk IMO.
you remind me so much of Jin, no homo. lol
you just sound like him to me.

the second verse is just as good as the first.

uhm im thinkin on the hook add a little effect to it or the backing vocals to give it a voicemailish sound and mix the primary a lil more.

otherwise. illl

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