Within Eternity's Wither
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Not a bad display of multi-syllable rhyming, flow was consistant from both, syllable count fell off in a few places but didn't effect much of either verses, imagry was pretty decent, altho the emotion couldn't been highten, both of you have decent vocabulary skills so im a lil impressed by that, props on the drop.
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