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Old 10-16-05, 01:19 AM   #3
Barr
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So, what alias are you?

I'll be honest, this was a great drop. I thought the rhyming at the start was a bit forced, like you had abit of writers block and were looking for a way to kick it off, but it gradually got better and better and became an easier read. This drop was art too. Alot of metaphorical things and just makes other artists respect what they're doing and love what they're doing, which is good. Fav Line:

Friends have been lost forever
I’m hoping that like my art, I rip them
Then they come back together

And although this hobby eats away at me, and cuts of my health
I need to be an artist because art is an art in its self
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