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Old 08-13-07, 01:02 PM   #22
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This was feedback posted for Thoth

IP:

just cuz ur leading 21-1 I still own ur ass
cuz my rhymin skills top Your souls turned to ash
2ed line aint rhyme well..

Thinking ur better den me is all u can say
but id rarther see you cut urself wid ur own razor blade
aight...

I know ur gonna be person saying im a dyslexic
but thats comin from nobody thats a dibetic
aight..

I got you ticked off Thoth i'll boil u like a broth
u sound better rappin bitch when you do a cough
eeh...

ya rhymes are cheesy like ur whole personality and shit
but cant u see that im making your mentallity split
not feeling this...

and by the way bitch dont write more den my verse
cuz i'll give u a early funeral and burn down ur church
aight..

you need ten hours to spit cuz i gather u bein slow
but half of ur shit you say dont have a meanin though
oook..

this fags aint bringing heat when he's singing to beats
u'd be more talented at somet else like swinging your feat
not a good ending...

u lack hard punches...
u had a few personal...
flow was aight sometimes u kinda fell off thou...

alla round aight verse... 6 outta 10

NEXT...


he's...Not a stan or a herb..more like a quivering mitch..
all elements of rap work for me, techniques just my delivery bitch..
aight...

bottom of the barrel, you're nothing, and i'm laughin..
at the fact it would be talkin you up, to say you are a has been..
decent..

washed up you're not, you were never grimey to start with..
thought you were gully cause readin' is you're idea of hard BITCH.
aight...

no difference, gutter or greasy, this is easy, it's nothin to stomp vets, believe me.
you're dyslexic ass doesn't get the context, PLEASE, GIVE UP ON TEXT COMPLETELY!
ha nice..

you're simple, let's face it...dude says shit like "very younger"
need help interpreting? building or style, my complex is what you get buried under..
aight...

this guy's just dumb, never elevated, but has stayed lost, fallin'
i know you're not good at math but you can't escape addition, to your loss column.
decent...

because five plus zero equals your record, seven and eighteen.
and my spot heaven gave me was taken..cause i've picked on a retard as of lately..
eeh ending...

u had decent personal..
u'r punches was decent and harder hitting then tech...
u'r creativeness was decent..
flow was good..

all around not a bad drop.... 8 outta 10...