Very good pieces from both teams.

I'm going to cut right to the overall break down of what I thought instead of critiqing each verse.

Revaltion and DQ - I thought you both had a good colorful vocabulary. You both put good emotion into the piece which made it a fun to read piece. Your imagery was very nice, however I was feeling the other verses more. Neither of you had stretched lines which is good. Only a couple forced rhymes i felt in this one and that is important. Good piece.

Crazy Hades and Max - Great piece. Only thing I have to say is about the lines. Some of your lines were a tad bit on the stretched side. Your vocabulary was very colorful and appropriate. I enjoyed your imagery because I had a good mental picture going. Pretty good emotion on this one, I could feel what was going on for the most part. Most of your rhymes were on point, one or two may have been forced. Overall great piece guys!

^ That should sum it up for ya'll.

\V/ - Crazy and Max

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