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Old 06-29-03, 01:24 AM   #13
Dyslexic
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Brooklyn and Grimey both had weak methods and rhyme structures, no rhyme-scheme, no style-change, no intervals nothing, I give it to Brooklyn tho for multi's and methods. Grimey's lines had no balance.