Lookin' at your pic, I see you suffer from the munchies
Cuz you got enough fat in your cheeks, to feed 7 thirdworld countries
^^decent opener, but i didnt quite see the fat part..its ok thou..lol..7/10
Facin' an "alien" like you? Nope, not what I demanded
Shit, look at the light behind you, man, your mothership jus landed!!
^^setup was eh, but punch was funny as hell in my opinion..8.5/10
Damn, kid, you're a mistake, wit skater shirt. Dude, you're wack to me
Your birth certificate?...................................... ........
.................................................. .. A sorry letter from condom factories
^^setup was choppy, punch was short n not very effective...5.5/10
You could race against turtles and slugs, but couldn't beat 'em
Man, you couldn't come in first, if you replaced Adam in Eden
^^wouldve been better if this was the final match#1, get me..?
but it was still a decent punch.....7/10
And you kno Canadian's gay, and always doggy style fuck
Y'all only do it that way, so y'all can BOTH watch the puck
^^lol,.ya this was decent... ya'll x 2 just didnt sound right
but it was an ok bar/punch.............................7/10
Kid, sittin' wit all that "hair"..... he looks like a "Survivor" nut
If this shit was the show, Drake's not the only thing that should be cut
^^ok bar n meta........................................7.5/10

*beat stops*

Wet Willy shoves his dick up Drake's behind, cuz that shit makes him cushy
Then he shoves it down Drakel's mouth, cuz it's the closest he gets to pussy
^^??...lol, nah i want feein this at all
seemed pushed n rushed like you wrote it right before you dropped
ya verse n didnt even bother to read it twice............3/10
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good drop, commedial punches which were funny, alien line was great
complexity was minimal, personal were there, verse was good overall..45.5/70
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officially back now, RV's better off, so this bitch should know
the only time you'll have a hit single, is inpersonating ichiro
^^nice, punch was clean.........................8.5/10
while RV has had its fill of whack lately, spul is over-eating
you got re-named 'rec-less' after you were banned for cheating
^^decent, but false.........^^wasnt after.....but decent..7/10
look into comedy man, you got some talent there, thats a fact
you could really make it big, just make your text is the act
^^punch seemed to be worded all wrong..??..what happened...4/10
ya hit bottom, so after a year you think the only place to go is higher
shit, you're known by two names but yet i still havn't heard of either
^^decent, but not hard hitting....................................6/10
aint mushroom for losers, especially when its you whos molding a career
cause only time you pounding anybody, is when youre holding their beers
^^i almost didnt get this,....setup was worded a bit off..
but punch was original as hell, n the lay-text/spul threads support it
but these were dropped before the whole deleting korv incident......8.5/10
spul aint nobody to fear, just a wannabe tryna hold a mic
i pitch my verse to him, blows by like its his third strike
^^concept was blah, punch wasnt really any good......5/10
aint no competition, spul needs a boost to come out with the greater grade
so he goes sucks off some crocs, cause he saw a commercial for gator-ade
^^setup was koo, punch lacked...........................4/10
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verse had some strong points, but some bad wording issues
rendered alot of your punches useless n didnt let them connect
all in all, ok verse thou kesse.....................44/70
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!