v/ Anxiety...

Drama, I really think with your ideas you could have taken this, if the lines weren't to stretched. Liked the approach and everything you were sayin through out the piece, but it was hard to read along sometimes. Anxiety, nice piece man, really liked it about even with Drama's, but I was just able to read it more smoothly and just made the piece better overall.

Best lines...
Drama:
In fact,do we even exist or is this merely a past phase we reminisce?
Because in the end...the truth is never simple and yet...it is

Anxiety:
Live to die, but dont we actually just die to live?
If heaven is so much greater, why waste time with this?