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Old 04-25-07, 05:54 PM   #8
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Eh, pretty good battle here.

DaTrus-i was feelin pretty much ya whole verse. Wording was off at first, but i felt you pick it up towards the end as well. Not many others were feelin ya closer but i thought it was pretty cool, descent concepts from you here. A little bit too much 'yo momma' though.

tony-wording is the only thing that killed you here. overall concepts were great. punches weren't bad. just the wordplay and possible mess ups due to lack of certain punctuation. One of ya better verses that i've seen lately. not bad

v/trus.
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