Ayo, I hate to break it to you, but Rap Don't Quite Suit You,
It's The passage of Life, And you didnt make it a 1/6 through,
good
You Suck Dude, I'll put it plain and Simply for you to read,
2 bars of the same shit for you, In case its not plain to see,
no
It's Symettry, That means that you gon' Fold easily Fool
Taiwan aint the place to be, don't they still have slavery dude?
pretty good
I'll walk the pavement with you, your beneath me, and everyone,
Your Quick and Clean way of losing a verse, Is next to none
no
The way Taiwan produces them, you'd think you'd toy with someone,
And Your attempts to make it as King Of RV, have been ranked at 71
decent

Trifles, mince pies...damn man your stereotype needs be broaden
cause when syms surrounded by 400 distills...call him "Jail Warden"
ehh
and so only the dopest will survive...so for you death is in effect
it's not just skills wise 60 more heads dies...
...your wackness's giving em heart attacks.
doesnt fit well...
you're what I expect...most of ur punches don't make half sense
I could tell your time's long over...cause "distilled"'s a past tense
good
jan 2005...I don't really care...I'm just gonna give you big hiding
cause I see you so problemmatic! ummm wait that's you rhyming
ehh
damn...telling us not to fuck with the family, but really what for?
the reason we don't read your rhymes......it might really be ours!
good

to close to call ill edit in my vote later