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Old 08-09-08, 11:36 PM   #10
YouAndWhatArmy
Herb
 
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IP:

the road to victory's always different, so listen, you won't stop me
cause personally i like to bash a Way... and leave bruises all over his body
The wording on this punch was shockingly gay.
this dudes in the gutter, and me, i strike down the whole alley
i really don't have to state much about him... just he's lucky he beat CALI
Ok, regardless of the fact that I don't know CALI, this punch read as a statement and it was really basic.
cause i read that whack verse, and lemme say, it was beyond lame
and i'm not talking about western films, i've dropped better shit on the John, Wayne
WOW, can you say played.
enough with the gangsta drama bitch, you can tell that you're a class whimp
i bet the last time you tried actin' hard, probly got your ass whipped
Again, this is more of a statement. Weak bro.
Taco always swings hard, so everyone knows i'll smack this whore in
and leave him with a Dent so big... Gotham City would be asking for him
I get the concept, that was cool. The execution was weak.
its dinner time though, so peace to wayne, the mod... one last hit for the day
just know i'm not talking nameplays or girlfriends... but this was a lil easy, lay
Yeah, no comment.


VS.


see i understand his panic... beatin me? you ever so wrong
when i squad up, this essay'll need back up, so ET better phone holmes
Lol, the wordplay in this was cool bro.
so face it bloke, i'll bring the racist jokes you're outta luck
he dont stand a quarter of a chance.... cause he's breakin his back tryin to pick it up
No, this was utter garbage.
I am batman? i guess bruce's outcome is always the same
lookin for a bale out? funny cause the W will end in my name
Concept was nice, execution was poor.
Els always dinin on meatheads, with a mouth wide for fun
tried tossin salads, but taco never thinks outside the bun
This was weak bro.
he leads a faggot life, not dope, he's borderline like a hermaphrodite
his skill in black and white? well, more like the michael jackson type
OH HELL NO! Get the fuck outta here with the MJ lines.
you aint half as nice, with no delays or hope you better plan it right
his life is on a wing and a prayer, and i clearly just cancelled flight
Ok concept, weak execution again.


What the fuck is up this week? I've seen two decent verses and both were in my battle. Seriously, y'all need to step it up. I am actually finding some of these votes amusing because most of you are giving props to lines that were being dropped back in 2002. This battle was weak, I found that both battlers had at least one or two concepts that could've been executed nice. They failed though with poor wording. Lil Wayne, or the dude who posted up the verse, whatever, he had the only punch in this entire battle worth mentioning and that was his opener. It wasn't great, but the wordplay was cool and it made me giggle.

v/ - Lil Wayne, bring more consistency next time.
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