nice... heres mine:

little man claiming he be an allstar/10
bitch, im better at this shit by-far/9
my dog PiMpiNTaY has my back/8
i smack ya in da face and make u wack/9
i didnt understand a fucking thing u said/12
sounded as stupid as P.T. said my mom gave'em head/13
all that shiz bout sue-per-star and shit/8
why dont u hand me ur pink slip and quit/10
my punches come fast and hard/7
ill dump u like a bankrupt credit card/9

nice closer, everything else was kinda crappy, and please vote on my other battle against PiMpiNTaY080. P'z