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Old 05-03-07, 10:33 AM   #15
DaTrusHurtz
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I beat you fast. yeah, brando is the boss of the boss
is that a wig your wearing? or is it the top of a mop?

vs.

10 years for Manslaughter? Damn, ya son didn't finish right dude
Raise children.....your fuckin daughter committed suicide too

Sprungy, ur verse looked rushed. A lot of really simple concepts n' not that much wit in ur verse, was expectin' more. Mop shit was good and puffa fish was aight, but that was about it. Civilized, was hopin' to see improvement this week. I saw a little, but not much. Ur wording is still a bit awkward n' u gotta work on soundin' more direct. Ur concepts were much better than his though n' u came more consistent so u got this.

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