this was definitely on some laid back shyt... i was actually kinda feeling this... sumn to pump in da ride gettin blazed with ya boys, nah mean?...lol


Ike:

flow was actually pretty good... didn't hear where ya fell off at all like some of the other kats said... but yeah... ya need to be a lil more grimy with ya verse if ya gon use a beat like this... ya voice is kinda high so ya gotta get amped up and deliver like UPS , feel me
lyrics were aiight....

Chron: definitely feeling ya flow on this better... you're suited for this kinda beat... sounds like ya average crunk track with a lil versatility in da flow... good job... glad ya didn't yell "Oh-Kaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyy" or "YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH H!!!!"...lmao... definitely need to do sumn about that hiss on ya vocals, though... pretty much da only real flaw i saw on this track...

i, personally, woulda flippped it on some twista shyt to this beat... it's too slow for me so i'd have spiced it up with that kinda style...feeling it as an "album-type" track but the task is to make it a "hit track".... this would be one of them supoorting role tracks on a decent album... good shyt y'all... stay up

PS... Per Se > A-Team..lol.... j/p....lmao.... or am I?...lol

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