killah.bwoy:

Your Wack, Your Garbage, truth is, Im Just Not Feelin' You..
Losin' Is your best Customer, And You Smokin Up all Your profits,
...........Sorta' Like Drug Dealers do..
^^ good meta weak punch 6/10
Hotshh.. <--Did Himself a favour and didn't finish the sentence..
Only Time Your Fired Is Blowin Farts While Competing On The Apprentice..
^^ liked the set up... punch was decent 6/10
Quickly, Murder this Hoe, With murderous Flows, Reload-n-then-Blow..
Medicine Man? Kid Stays Down, After a Multiple Liquidized Viagra Dose..
^^1st line was fire.. 2nd line was worded completely wrong 7/10
Punches Knock You to Heaven, Back down, So you can "live life after"..
Your Current Progress Similar to fat people Participatin in Stair Masters..
^^ set up line = wack punchline = good 7/10
Hotshh's Chances Of winnin', Slimmer Then Anerexic Sumo Wrestlers..
Embrace His hands around His Rap sheets, so he can feel soft Textures..
^^ehh decent closer 7/10

overall : 33/50 (66%)

killah you had another bar its 12 lines should have used the extra 2 lines

hotshh!:

You Gassed See....Only in the 2nd Round...from a no show Last Week...
Ya Album cover got a dumspter...... Cuz ya lyrics is where da Trash Be!
^^first line was fire 2nd was decent dumpster lines are played 6/10
When 'Killa' Dont pay rent...Thats the only time He ever Got A Vic. (Evict)
You So Weak.....Even In Ya 'avy'... Cam Praying to Make it Out of It!
^^lmao dope personal 8/10
So U Should Skip Battling....You couldnt set fire to Trick Candles And
You might as well be from Detroit....The way u Couldnt 'Rip' Hamilton!!
^^ another dope bar good consistency 8/10
Fuck Tournaments Ya Skills is Void..Break ya Speakers Just 2 Kill da Noise
He couldnt hang wit Grown Men....So Kontraverzy had to Killah Bwoy !!
^^lmfao dope as fuck best bar 10/10
Flow dealt me this 'Joker'...So I'll 'Cut Em Up'..Like Cards Drawn Fair...
While you 'Break Under Pressure'....like Bone Crusher in a Lawn Chair!!
^^lmao@bone crusher in a lawn chair good bar good meta 7/10
"Is He Back"?...No!...He's Too Wack!..A weak punch'll make His Rib Sore..
So Fuck A Studio.....Kontraverzy should go "drop" From the Sixth Floor!!
^^good way to close it dope bar 8/10

overall : 47/60 (78%)

vote: hotshh!

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