Wasnt really feelin this, jummped around wit the subjects a lot like u said ur structure was fucked......ur lines to stretched out.....try and get each line to end up at the same spot......ur vocab was simple you need to up on that......enhance it as ur verse goes along.....Ur multis was basic dawg.....up on that too no hate just giving straight feedback....!rtf on my sig links if u would.....peace dawg keep evelvatin keep posting....1