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Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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IP:
this was good y'all, both did an excellent job...imagery and emotion stood out the best on both parts, vocab and structure were pretty good too, keep it up y'all.
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i come from a time when you earned respect,
for your rhyme and the way you made words connect,
not the money that you made or the girls you sexed,
a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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