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Couple of things.....this IS 30 lines its just a different structure & if its confusing its because I had to condense it alot...but yeh.....good luck guys.
Stuart was a street mime. . .
. . .providing joy to the kids,
& every week at the same time. . .
. . .he saw a beautiful girl cross the bridge.
He never knew her name. . .
. . .but he wanted to so much,
he saw she liked to draw. . .
. . .so he learnt about art & such.
Just to have that moment. . .
. . .to speak on a mutual interest,
so he could take her hand & hold it. . .
. . .& let his heart confess. . .
that she captured his gaze. . .
. . .by the ways that she’d move,
& he just wanted to say. . .
. . . “that I love you.”
Corny as it seemed. . .
. . .those words he wanted to utter,
but what really held him back. . .
. . .was the fact he had a stutter.
Worried that would make him it seem. . .
. . .he was a retard,
made him a bag of nerves. . .
. . .& his lungs start breathe hard.
As the sweat poured. . .
. . .he approached her by the bench,
Gulping hardly. . .
. . .with his fists tightly clenched.
“h-h-hello my n-name is Stu. . .
. . .I’ve seen you for a while,
& all I’ve wanted to do,
is be close to your smile. . .
I-i-i-‘m sure this is w-w-weird. . .
. . .it m-m-may appear like it,
b-b-ut I c-cant get out m-my words. . .
. . .b-because I’m so ex-excited!”
she looked at him nervously. . .
. . .to her this was a complete shock,
not a word escaped her mouth. . .
. . .& her stomach tied in nots.
10 seconds went by. . .
. . .stu had tears by his eyelids,
with nothing but his heart. . .
. . .to break the silence.
He ran away embarrassed. . .
. . .not wanting now to live,
so he ran by the river. . .
. . .& climbed on Witsmore bridge.
She saw what he was doing. . .
. . .she ran but it was too late,
the girls loss of words. . .
. . .decided Stuarts fate.
She was not to blame. . .
. . .but the dealer of the hand she was dealt,
for Stuart words were hard. . .
. . .& this trouble she also felt.
I mean what can you do. . .
. . .if the words wont release from your tongue,
how can you answer I love you. . .
. . .if your def & dumb.
by the way "dumb" is a word used to people who are mute.
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