Step back from the mic.....can hardly hear what you're saying. Flow is a little choppy, but goes with the beat. I guess it's alright if you like that down south shit. Maybe you should put a sock over your mic. You weren't really rapping about nothing. Wouldn't really be that bad if you fixed your vocal quality. You need to fade it out at the end too.....no one wants to hear a song just cut off. Wasn't bad for your first audio though. Keep dropping....you'll get better at it




PS......fix your link. This is the one that works...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/deniedtruthmusic.htm

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