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Old 08-13-05, 09:47 AM   #15
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this borin bitch housin less talent than a dumb bumb
ya this kid is king solo... cuz his rhymes too wack to engage sum1
worst set-up ever, but decent pick-up in the second line...
learn to word your lines right and quit explainin 'this' and 'that'*
cuz we knew your lines found wackness before u wrote out the map
i thought this was pretty funny... im assuming the map is tha ""//**'s right?
overall, this verse was kinda weak, nothing stood out much but the closer. i've seen better from you...
vs.

I seen picture nameplays come and go, so fuck entertaining you
Cuz I cud ‘piss a better nameplay’ kid……yea, I can P-P-2
although this was used last week, i still think it was pretty funny...worth mentioning
Shame this ain’t for the LW belt, cuz ya cud perform another recital
I mean 4 times you’ve challenged for it, but never won the title
not really a punch but i think it was kinda hard hitting
Forget matching ya bars kid, cuz seriously ya lack of skillz is scary
So instead I’ll ‘draw my win playin off ya name’ like this is ‘picture-nary’ *
meh, still one of ur better lines tho...

V/ Solo for winning...
LMAO!! what a vote... but seriously, vote solo for better punches... i think the PP line won it although picture's closer was in the ranks