Rev - First thing I noticed wsa that your quality was ass.....but I'm pretty sure you already know this. Your delivery was monotonous as well. Pretty short track. You need to work on your presence a little bit and try memorizing most of your lyrics before you spit them. Only use your written out lyrics as a guideline so you don't lose your place.

Will Appear - lol @ the fresh az im iz beat. This sounded more like a diss track, but overall it wasn't that bad. I'd have to say that you had a better overall track this time. Flow wasn't bad and neither was your delivery. Good job....

Vote - Will Appear

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