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Old 02-06-04, 05:08 PM   #24
VanIllabymidnite
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Here's how I see it.

Flow=Carson, had a good flow to it and was a good read. Dope, some of your rhymes were forced which hurt your flow.

Punches=Carson, he had better punches all around, some which made me laugh. Dope you need some work on your punches they were kind of lacking.

Personals=Carson, I couldn't find any real personals in Dopes verse.

Vocab=Tie, neither of you had much vocab in these drops.

Over all=Carson, this was an over all good verse, you had good punches and personals and your flow was good, the only thing that could use some work is your vocab which you didn't really need to take this one, keep it up.
Dope, you could use some work on your punches and personals, your flow was okay but the forced rhymes hurt you, you could also use some work on your vocab, but that wasn't what hurt you in this battle, just keep trying and you should get there.

Vote=Carson
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