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Old 02-05-05, 12:23 PM   #2
Kyleon
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that was ok drop hommie...why did ya call it hook on the verse also?..idk anywayz ya structure needs improvement...flow was ok here nice rythem....Wordplay was used good in dis drop...sum lines i thought were wack but some were dope...nice job its was ok...and work on ya chorus a lil more..thats all i have to say no hate

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