Your opinion say I don't have originality that's fine..But who's they? Only one person voted in this battle and that's DQ. Your right I don't have Vocab but you dont always need vocab. In my opinon I think my piece was original..You may don't but I do...Now The thing you didn't do was to follow it up..You went RIGHT into the main Topic when you could've expanded and go toward the ending...It was fast and it was boring (In my opinon) Which I did..I expanded and put down a story Like I always do and follow it up to the ending. "Expansion" is the key word here, if you expanded your piece you could've won this...But you went str8 ahead into the main topic making it not intersting and shit..In my opinion. You can create a small piece and it still can be very good and complex..with metaphors and similies decent wordplay..

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ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*