Voted For: led poetic

L.P. u did sick as fuck right here

I'm lovin the two stansas for each type of style..
the story was great..and oviously the vocab amd
emotion was there..the structure could've been better..
I wa feeling this..................................alot lol
the complexity wasn't too mind boggling either..
so I give you thumbs up for that..

E.S.

please change ur structure..it seemed like nothing
was special..just you rapping..no emotion..not 1st
person veiw..nor narraotor..it was changed to fir the
rhyme scheme..you must keep it consistent to win battles
pick a style..

vote/L.P.

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