you should change your way of writing...write it in lines instead of paragraph it fucks up the flow

instead of this...Da don iz in the building/vacate da women & children/cause after dis freestyle it aint gone be no healin/on a mission fo cream/

put this...
Da don iz in the building
vacate da women & children
cause after dis freestyle it aint gone be no healin
on a mission fo cream...


^now you could notice how fucked up the flow and structure is....but anyway welcome to the site vote fairly

peace