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Old 02-02-05, 06:44 AM   #8
K.ontroverz.Y
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Posts: 9,196
From: Hamilton
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messing with me is consiquential, ill demolish your dentals, i consist essentials,
ill bring the facts of credential, thinking he shows potential, lets learn fundimentals,
Good use of multi's but it didnt make any sense at all. 5/10
you dont wanna show me no disrepect, his dicks erect, come near me and ill snap ur neck,
my punches connect, picking you up the council must be wrecked, leave you full of neglect,
Umm this was decent. nothing special..5/10
you might be known, ill smuggle in 2 bottle that connect to your dome, just like al capone,
bin hit dat much u'll be pissin out bladder stones, u get so scared ur shadow walks u home,
lol NO this was wack. and it didnt make sense 4/10
your unknown to da game, i check ur profile all i saw was ur name, u appear to be lame,
im be somthin u neva became, wit ur fake proclaims, take cova cuz i got u sighted-n-aimed,
you threw a personal in their. wuld be good if this was a personal batle. 4/10

E.C: mayn you just threw shit everywhere haha....you didnt even make sense. but you did have good use of multi's but it doesnt matter if you just rhyme words....

18/40

Daz

Is it WORDPLAY YOU SEEK, ………or gay FOREPLAY WITH GEEKS,
You must STAY WITH BEATS..?, cuz I don’t PRAY FOR WEAKS,(weeks)
yeah this was decent...nice multi and punch 7/10
While writing were you CHAFFED FOR AIR…?...four me to “LAUGH IS FAIR”,
E=MC SQUARE…? ya missin structure cuz ya equations ONLY HALF THERE,
this was aiight nothing special 6/10
When STEPPIN-TRY SIGHT, im discountin ya thread like REFFING TAI(tie)FIGHTS,
Ill be POLITE Your twice the pussy I thought, like JOGGING BYE DYKES,(bi-dykes)
umm no...... 5/10
This LEAGUE,…. im IN IT TO STAY….cuz It only takes a MINUTE TO SAY,
I’de MIMIC YOUR WAYS, but to spit it would be over the LIMITS OF GAY,!!
ok closer..nothing tooo good 6/10

overall your shit was aiight. you only used 2 multi's but i wont count it this time. next time you might get disqualified. but you have to use 3 multi's

24/40

Vote DAZ
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