Alright. .

Varentao - A nice take on the topic,
i loved the imagery used in it & with
such few words, and how it was
kinda stop / start added to its
intensity for me. You really caught
the feeling of the topic and portraid
it in this piece, it gave it an eerie
atmosphere to it, nice take on the
tooic. .

Deacon - You really caught me off
guard with that verse! I kind of
expected you to follow suit and
go for the same kinda take on it as
Varentao, but you flipped it nicely,
the piece wasnt vivid to me, i loved
the imagery in it, you really got indepth
with the description of the picture
and i liked that, again, a 'minimalist'
piece as id call it, saying so much in so
few words, but it was a great piece.

Overall - i really liked both verses, two different takes on the topic but both really original, i got into Deacon's one of the painting, the imagery in them both was top notch but thinking back to the topic, Varentao's verse summed it up more for me, his emotion, atmosphere, imagery, just the piece as a whole really conveying it for me.

Sorry deacon, this was a harsh battle, both wrote good pieces, but my vote:Varentao

Pz.

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