drums r aight...the first melody is a bit repetative, the first part of the synth cut u used with the low distorted sound is nice....but when u let that synth keep playin it has the seond sound come in and does the 3 note riff. i wasn't feelin that 3 note riff. I would cut off the end of the cut and maybe add sumthin else instead., second is melody cool, like the transition at the end. decent, but i'd work on the first melody more.

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