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Old 05-20-07, 09:32 AM   #1
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Everyone needs to fuckin get on point. And get serious.




Last Weeks Breakdowns


Intense it E .vs. 2v


Intense just couldn't follow up with the right wording here. Alot of his lines were basic, structure was all out of wack. Vocab weak. No concepts. You need to lengthen them lines up, add more content. Metaphors/cliches etc.
2v came witty for the most part. Tried to be funny in some lines. Concepts overall werent bad. Then again weren't too harsh either.



GKillaz05 .vs Lungz

Lungz couldn't follow through with the rules, and got DOMINATED by Gkillaz correct ammount of lines



Outro


Don't be a toilet seat. Or i'll shit on you. Just fuckin show up, and post. Just like you did when u signed up. Thank you all for reading this glorious mag. Have a good day.
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