Squirming in anguish gittering against the wood
Uttering his sentences yet the meaning is pure
It's heard outloud with great meaning
His screams of terror are loud
Absurd at most;
Mental errors father 15 deep in alcohol
Tramatized; he's on meds
He sleeps bedless,dreamless he's almost gone


No. He wont have it
Suffer no longer will he
The suicidal thoughts are over
He has taken action
He has taken death


His parents oblivious to his previous thoughts
Still oblivious to his death
Its dramatic..Its unfortunate..Its LIFE
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this is were i got stuck to your writing cus this got me hooked...it was nicely done but i see some flaws but woot to this man i say one of your best cus of your choice of writing style and choice of vocab!.

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