ok, both of yours were great.
Filed:
topic: it seems as if you were centered on one blessing that you have.
flow: it was great, everything flowed nicely
emotion: in parts seemed like you were mad, then sad. mixed emotions in my point of view.
what i got out of it is that all the blessings you have, you owe to god and you thank him for them.

Twizted:
topic: you put all of ur blessings in one.
flow: great, flowed nice.
emotion: madd emotion. start off suicidal, then u put a warm feeling to it.
what i got out of it was that you have many blessings and they mean everything to you. Like if you didnt have those blessings you wouldnt be here today.

overall i think that twizted's wus better. seemed like it had a lot more feelin and emotion into it. im not hatin, u both did a great job.