Real talk.

This would be a solid audio peice. Recorded and spat it will be nice, but as a text peice its weak. imo.

Personally a text peice shoul dbe aretistic and poetic. Try writing topics n shit bro. I understand these are lyrics, and there nice lyrics, few smooth multis in it and some nice flows when rapped, but when read as a text peice it lacks so much.

Check my drop in verbal emotions tourny and see what I mean by text peices have diffrent styles.

Stay learning and elevating, look foward to readin what you come up with next bro.


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