This Scam Artists...tryin His Hardest..But Soc said u Betta LayLo
Wheres ya Korv Money Phony..So tony..Tell me wheres ya Yayo?
^^OK....not that hot tho...4/10
1st times nice..But beat me Twice..But thats Like Ya Job.....Fake
Its no Mistake Bein ya Fathers Father only way you come out Great
^^hated that set-up...punch was ite...5/10
Yet Word on the Net..is your Vet?..Sheeeeet....Ya cant Whore Me
Ya Win Positions Fiction strictly cuz u only WIN.when tellin a Story
^^OK....nice flow..8/10
Mr Topical......winnin twice Is Impossible So stop your frontin Trick
Placeing in Marathons in a Mr Hanky Fit..Only time u was Runnin Shit
^^good...7/10

OK....personal in every line..so that was good.I liked the internals in that 2nd to last line.
I thought you started off really bad..but ended up goin good afterwards.

Yea, Troop 'you 5 Minz 4rm my Chik Mouf' But im 1 away from yours
Plus a single punch will make you hit the deck.....walls and doors*
^^well...decent....5/10
Ya think youre the best, But name one person that youre better than
My verse'll make you feel the beat and dance like youre the Jeffersons*
^^better than/Jeffersons?..even accented it's be hard to work it to
rhyme and I though the punch was executed a lil bland..5/10
Dont even drop.. Just hit the sack.. Cause everyone's hoping you rest
Ill send so many hits to this bitch that you'll be groping ya chest*
^^good...8/10
Pussy You aint hot, Not even one of your lines could harm me
Just call me sargeant, I'll troop over you like i joined the Army
^^I find Troop/military lines are unoriginal..4/10

OK..I thought you had some decent concepts and all.But some wasn't put together
well enough.Flow went to troop easily due to his internals n shit..n you had a line that
didn't rhyme(jeferrson's one).And that last bar...troop/military lines are unoriginal.
Creativity is a must in battles.

So my HONEST opinion....is that troop got it for coming more creative and shit

Vote-Troop