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Old 10-02-05, 02:37 PM   #41
.Ike.
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LOL @ all yall songs about the ladies....

first dude....

quality is ok...flow is ok...it could be touched up a lil bit...but its decent...delivery n presence is coo.....i think you could maybe mellow out a lil bit more

2nd dude....

flow is coo....delivery is coo.....quality is ok....u laid back a lil more....this was a decent verse....not too bad....


3rd dude...

i think you came the nicest here.....lyrically u had some coo lines....flow was good...presence n delivery was there.........nice verse....



overall this was a coo track........keep it up...

Decree n Spul.....RTF......Tizzle already did lol....

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210373
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