Not a bad track, beat was alright, nothing that made me go DAMN.. But yeah, lyrics were aiight.. Flow got a bit too slow, or off beat at points for both of you.. Also if you wanna sound more professional you need to drop the spitting on pre made verse times too.. It sounded like you were just hitting the verses up with lyrics to fit whats already there..

So yeah, just start tampering with pulling loops out of the beats you download and using cool edit like more of a dj program. You'll find your stuff will start to sound a lot more professional when you have control over the beat aswell as the lyrics and hooks you put down.

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RIP jono, peace out bboy.
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