This is going to be hard.

Lay Fear:
Your piece was nice. I liked your emotion, and story you told. Only thing I didn't like, was your flow. Every line in your verse was stretched. Even in the smaller font, your lines were longer than both of your opponents. But it was good tho.

Jay-Brook:
I liked the authenticity of your piece. Most of the people in this league(including me) just write a story that's made up for the topic. But you wrote some true things. You had nice flow, nice emotion. But, only at the end of your piece did I get a feeling that you were on the topic of this picture. But still a nice piece.

L.E:
Your piece was nice. I liked the story and concept of what you were talking about. You had more flow than emotion and content. Your piece went with the picture decently. Good job

V/ Lay Fear
even tho it was stretched, it was the best story for this picture.

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The Scholar