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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP:
You got a good vocal.. but you dont utalise it well enough... and you need to up your lyrics....
I listened to a few tracks off that myspace... beats are all good, but you need work... more consistancy with dope lines... some of your rhymes are boring cause ya techniques can be a bit simplistic.. word usage... conceptual issues and I'm sure you could utalise that already half decent sounding vocal a lot better...
keep doin ya thing man... i dunno if your trynna make rap a career if you are ill be a lot more specific otherwise ill just leave it at that....
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