Thread: Music Is Dying
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Old 11-19-03, 03:07 PM   #30
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yo this is a real ill ass fuck piece very nice and poetic i love da way u started wit:

"Deep into the Music, where a Beat is Useless
And writers voice Alone is the Soul of Featured Blueprints."

and then u kept me reading to find out how deep ur meaning goes wit reading this line:

"Lines of ‘Borrowed’ beat samples, sound amped & create hype,
But that cant compare to how raw emotion Sounds on the Mic."

and then u went deeper wit da emotion and da thought of lyrics wit this line:

"Now that’s Real lyricism, no instrumental For Help
Just an artist with something to say and then, Hoping He’s Felt."

and on of da realist thought and idea is all written in one line and which happens to be my favorite line in this whoe piece:

"Beneath the music lies its one true sign: Freedom Of Speech"

and to end it all wit a nice line:

"Hiphop’s not of Interest To Me, so its Useless Trying
I see spoken word as the future."

overall this was a real good example of a tight poetic keystyle wit a real meaning..ill ass fuck work hope to read some more of ur stuff
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