damn man this is nice......

im eager to see how u perform it at def poetry...cause ima def be watching....DONT CHOKE FOO! lol...

this shit had some nice meaning to it....and its all true...i can def feel you...i think if you say it right....youll take the audience by storm...no question.......

i dont really know what to say...cause im ignorant when it comes to poetry...( i just like to listen to it )......but good job man....

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