I'm feelin the vibe of this track...real mature style


flow is good...and ur delivery fits the track


if there's any down to it, I'd say throw more surprises in the delivery or rhyming...I guess you don't have to, but it's make it interesting all the way through...At worse, this was consistent...at best, it was nice...so, either way, it's a good track


also...think of ways to distinguish ur hook from ur verse

otherwise...good piece dawg


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