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Old 07-14-06, 05:52 PM   #5
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Do Re Mi
 
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i actually read this whole thing.. im that bored.

it was good, rhymed just enough but not all corny and mother gooseish.
yes i said mother gooseish. nice buildup, small simple lines to long complex
thoughts and feelings, i was pleased. fuck you. have a nice day.
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